In Retrospect

ElshaHawk LoA

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In Retrospect

I should have shut my mouth

I should have stopped before

the truth slipped out

In Retrospect

it did nothing to heal me

I'm still broken inside

only now you are, too

In Retrospect

Maybe you aren't broken

Your flaw is that you ignore my

rantings and ravings

In Retrospect

What I thought was avoidance

and plain shallow unfeeling

was really swallowed anger

In Retrospect

You felt my frustration

But there was nothing you could do

so it was best to move on

In Retrospect

You treated me better

Than I deserved, for I was


In Retrospect

My tantrum and drama

My truth spewed out with venom

Didn't burn you


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