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Westchester Furioso

Hi, I'm Azel! Sort of homesick.


I can surf around but social media sites are blocked

I guess it's not too bad, it's just they won't let me sleep

trying to stay awake somehow

wish we could chat here or something, ask for a care package

there's a window but it's all like desert outside pretty generous providing the fan here

nothing to lie on

I think this is the sixth day

somenes coming


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ElshaHawk LoA

ElshaHawk LoA

Your scene grows with this ficlatté. You should start linking them together by using the sequel button.

  • #3385 Posted 1 year ago
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Robert Quick

Robert Quick

The two lines 'They won't let me sleep' and 'trying to stay awake' seem contradictory. If they won't let you sleep, why would you need to try and stay awake? Is the logical inconsistency because you are sleep deprived? If you wanted a care package perhaps you should have provided coordinates or an address. Isn't that what supposed to happen in stuff like this?

  • #3388 Posted 1 year ago
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Westchester Furioso

Westchester Furioso

the person who came just then was someone new, a man with a beard, I think maybe it's the other peoples boss? I wish I knew why they wanted me here I want to go home

  • #3399 Posted 1 year ago
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