Love and Hate Relationship (poem)

ElshaHawk LoA

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I love you

But I want you to hate me

For loving you

.

I hate me

And I want you to love me

For loving you

.

I hate you

For not loving me

When I love you

.

I love me

For not hating you

When I love you

.

I love you

Even if you love another

And don't love me

.

I hate you

For loving another

And not loving me

.

I hate me

For loving another

So you can't love me

.

I love me

For loving another

Before I loved you

.

I love you

And let you love another

When I want to hate

.

I hate you

For not hating me

When I want to love

.

I hate me

For wanting to hate you

When I only love

.

I love me

For never hating you

When you only love

.

I love you

And I love another

Which makes me hate myself

.

I hate you

And I hate your other

Which makes me know I love


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Robert Quick

Robert Quick

I swear I commented on this when it was posted but I guess it didn't take. I like the almost mathematical interplay of statements. While I'm not great at the Alice in Wonderland type logic and reasoning puzzles I do enjoy the word play which is what I see here.

  • #2981 Posted 1 year ago
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ElshaHawk LoA

ElshaHawk LoA

It took me a bit writing it to make sense, and I had to read it several times myself as I put it together, so I can imagine how many times a reader has to read it to grasp the enormity of what is going on here. It is a puzzle, and one of the heart.

  • #2982 Posted 1 year ago
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slapdashmonuments

slapdashmonuments

This sounds just like my headbabble. Gosh.

  • #2988 Posted 1 year ago
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