Sometimes broken means better
sometimes failure means experienced
means strong enough for the storm
brave enough for the waves of tears
weathered enough for the strikes of shame
hardened enough for the echoes of failure
fierce enough for the icy rejection in your eyes
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- #2938 Posted 1 year ago
This one I like but I don't love. I think it's the 'or not' at the end. My ending instead is that 'Sometimes is not enough' or something like it. Still good, I like your poetry better than most that I read.
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