Dash for school
I am nine years old. I love Dream League Soccer but I hate FIFA '15 on Android. I like playing football.
Tom woke up with a yawn: NINE O'CLOCK??
Seeing this, he went cuckoo. He quickly got dressed in a frantic dash, zoomed down the stairs, burst into the kitchen, gobbled up his breakfast, sprinted to school as fast as a cheetah and arrived just in time for registration.
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Comments (2 so far!)
Average reader rating 4.00/5
Well done, Joshua. You are now a published author. That's all it takes, and you've done it.
I hope your teacher is impressed.
- #858 Posted 5 years ago
- 4 out of 5
The run-on sentence is a good way to show how hurried and rushed Tom is.
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