You are nothing Special - RANT

Brebelles

I am one of the original Ficletters, way back when Ficlets was on AOL.

Then when there was no where to go, I headed of to Protagonize, nice community, but I couldn't get in the swing of things over there, and then all of a sudden, there was an announcement that a baby Ficlets, Ficly, was born! We were there for a good many years, but alas, some good things must come to an end...

Then, a nice fellow, started Ficlatte. THANK GOODNESS!!

I appreciate the hard work that was put into starting this site here - hopefully that will stay longer than the other two sites.

I am Brebelles,{LoA} League of Awesomeness - Saint Smiley. ^.^

I usually write poetry, but I do spin out the occasional story here and there.

My poetry began back in 2006/2007, mostly 2007 when a very dear friend had passed. I was young, she was close to my heart and I needed to get my feelings out... some way some how.

I love constructive criticism, so please comment, comment, comment!


Let's get down to business,

Let's talk.

Your selfishness has grown and grown,

To the point of no return.

See, you are the baby girl of the family,

Everyone caters to your every whim,

You think that you are the be all end all..

But let me stop you right there.

You are nothing special.

Just skin and bones,

Veins, arteries and muscles.

You are nothing special.

We all have those.

Thoughts, opinions, actions?

Yeah we have those too.

Sweetheart, you are nothing special.

Get over yourself.

There are others in the world,

Trying to be there for you,

Wasting our time waiting for you.

Time is a valuable thing,

and I am learning that,

You are nothing special.

There are others who appreciate what I do,

Much more than you.

They are something special.

They are not selfish, self absorbed.

Caring, loving, considerate.

Sadly, qualities you don't seem to possess.

Perhaps one day.

When no one is your friend.

You are all alone,

Then you'll see.

But then it will be too late.


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Comments (2 so far!)

ethelthefrog

ethelthefrog

Wow. The venom sprays off this piece. Passionate indeed.

I am left gasping.

Behind my protective face mask.

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ElshaHawk LoA

ElshaHawk LoA

Ah, the self-absorbed youth. So many lessons to learn.

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