Down the hill


I think creamer is better than milk, sugar or whipped cream.

Roll, Roll, ROLL down the hill

'how far along are we?' Asked a small voice in his cart.

'about a mile.' The farmer answers.

Oh no! a road block!

'Just where do you think you're going in such a hurry,' Says the guard.

'Escaping the city! The army is coming!' Shouts the farmer.

'Oh, my!' Exclaimed the guard, "I'm leaving, in that case, so you can go now,'

Off, off down the hill they go.


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ElshaHawk LoA

ElshaHawk LoA

I guess the guard is not sworn to protect anybody! :) I like that they have a clear shot out now.

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Sorry if it seems a bit broken, I am not terribly good at connecting thoughts.

  • #638 Posted 7 years ago
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ElshaHawk LoA

ElshaHawk LoA

That's what writing here does.. strengthens your talents for writing connected thoughts, writing outside of your comfort zone, and writing with others. I'm sure there are more benefits, too. I know there are. I have benefited from it!

  • #648 Posted 7 years ago
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