Turn From Nothing

THX0477

The Doctor has returned.


Nothing.

A vast expanse of unknowable darkness.

I saw it. My feet may have even dangled towards its embrace. Tiny shards, the whole of my heart broken long ago, tumbled easily down the well. Perhaps I should have grasped for them. Perhaps they will in their journey sprout to new life, inspire some other better love. Perhaps I will heal.

It saw me. The empty place took note of my frail existence. There may have been some laughter, or perhaps there is just a perpetual breeze in such a place. Tendrils of peril and loss crept forward, or was it backward? I can't say if I was falling up or down, turning left or right.

Something.

An uncountable sea of possibilities.

I saw it. One of those turns, or a flip, brought me round, away from the nothing. Just enough sparkle winked from the chaos to snag my attention, a fish on a line. All but limp, I allowed myself to drift back to the world. It would be okay. Things might happen.

In the end, I still knew where the nothing was.


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ElshaHawk LoA

ElshaHawk LoA

1. Love the profile sentence.

2. Great capture of the limp way a person decides to sigh and watch for hope. "Things might happen".

3. question: did you mean 'see' or 'sea'?

  • #509 Posted 5 years ago
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HSAR

HSAR

Welcome, THX! Good to see a familiar face.

I love the laughter/breeze line.

  • #512 Posted 5 years ago
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ethelthefrog

ethelthefrog

I shouted for joy when I saw your moniker. If you don't believe me, I have several witnesses. You are very welcome. Everyone else has heard me promise challenges, but they are on the way. Really.

Anyway. The story. I get the sense that the abyss is looking back and it seems to be hungry. But is our protagonist fortunate to have escaped its maw?

Great suspense, dripping with questions.

  • #518 Posted 5 years ago
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Storykeeper

Storykeeper

This is the perfect collaborative fiction--haunting, and wide open to interpretation. This could go any number of ways.

  • #1770 Posted 3 years ago
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