Beating Hearts


I'm a senior in college who loves writing in my free time (the very, VERY little I have of it). Looking to get any and all feedback about my work.

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The touch it burns

Fingers trailing, questioning, lingering

You lick your lips yearning

arms wrapped tight

A question in my eyes and pleasure on my lips

Your fingers brush my hips

A small moan is my acceptance

And now you don't hold back

We settle in this well known dance

You fill me up

Your breathing quick

My eyes search yours

lips part with every moan

A gasp escapes my lips

You stop it with a gentle kiss

And so we lay entangled

As we try to slow our beating hearts


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Mighty-Joe Young LOA

Mighty-Joe Young LOA

I like this, i wonder what happened to you?

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