My own Paradise


I'm a senior in college who loves writing in my free time (the very, VERY little I have of it). Looking to get any and all feedback about my work.

The grass is soft, tenderly kissing my feet

The air is sweet, warmly caressing my arms

Birds laugh and sing of bliss

Here I am, on my own

The sky is a brilliant blue and crystal clear

Rolling hills of multicolors stretch all around

Miles and miles pass by

Here I stand; my own paradise

I smile beneath the gentle sun

All the answers I do not have

But faith and trust in myself

Can get me where I need to go


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A Gypsy Heart

A Gypsy Heart


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