These Nine Years - 9.11.14

Brebelles

I am one of the original Ficletters, way back when Ficlets was on AOL.

Then when there was no where to go, I headed of to Protagonize, nice community, but I couldn't get in the swing of things over there, and then all of a sudden, there was an announcement that a baby Ficlets, Ficly, was born! We were there for a good many years, but alas, some good things must come to an end...

Then, a nice fellow, started Ficlatte. THANK GOODNESS!!

I appreciate the hard work that was put into starting this site here - hopefully that will stay longer than the other two sites.

I am Brebelles,{LoA} League of Awesomeness - Saint Smiley. ^.^

I usually write poetry, but I do spin out the occasional story here and there.

My poetry began back in 2006/2007, mostly 2007 when a very dear friend had passed. I was young, she was close to my heart and I needed to get my feelings out... some way some how.

I love constructive criticism, so please comment, comment, comment!


These short nine years,

have gone by so fast,

Our lives intertwined by-

love and trust - so vast.

From boys to books,

our friendship never

dared to forsook

because it is forever.

As we grow old-

-er, our secrets - untold,

our lives separated,

by time and it is fated.

My sweet friend,

life is about to change-

Right around the bend,

how crazily strange-

is that?!

About to be married-

Ah! My Cherie!

How exciting is this?

Something we can not miss.

I'm so happy,

at your wedding I'll be incredibly sappy,

sobbin my eyes out,

without any doubt.

Your Bri-on <3

To: Blossom


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ethelthefrog

ethelthefrog

Lovely sentiment here.

Tiny niggle though: "forsook" is past tense, you need "never dared to forsake".

I wish the newlyweds long and happy life.

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Brebelles

Brebelles

I wanted the past tense of the word.. lol

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