Challenge Deadline: 7 Apr 2017
Personally, I think this is a hard one (twss) but that's what challenges are for, right? Have a conversation between two or more people (people being intelligent entities, not necessarily human beings) where the omission of key information gets things moving. Someone is holding something back and the speaks even louder than if they said something. Silence can be golden. Silence can be loud. Here, I want silence to speak. As usual you have two weeks. Good luck.
Change the sentence that starts with 'Someone' to: Someone is holding something back and THAT speaks even louder than if they said something.
I couldn't edit it so hopefully you'll see this over here.